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Wednesday, June 3, 2009

tweaks

the website is a good frame work for the ideas i am trying to present but it needs more depth into the why, more meaning needs to be explored in the conflict between the extremists and biospark.
i also need to frame the story in a way that puts forward the question as to whether or not the a.i was the one who destroyed the city in a way to fight back.

- i have added more context in the conflict and also related it to ideas from dr frankenstein, by portraying the extremist groups as religious it references themes of creation, power and man and god used in the novel.

- i have added in a report that the explosion seemed to start from the top of the tower and not the bottom where the attack was, i have also added a statement from biospark placing the blame firmly on the extremists.

also i have referenced the film in one of my illustrations.

there is a bit more context to the conflict now and further ties the situation in with ideas from dr frankenstein, also more references to the relationship of fire and electricity.








i am also reconfiguring the pages structure as well as i noticed that when the site got navigated a couple of pages were missed.

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